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Band 6+: What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in a multicultural society?

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As I consider, living in a multicultural society will enhance the overall outlook of a person. A person living in a multicultural society will have to adapt to the different mentalities of the citizens. By living in a metropolis, you will be able to witness different kinds of people. For example, people from the Philippines and Europe generally have a big difference in the way they think.

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As I consider living in a multicultural society will assist by enhancing an overall outlook of a person and the person who is living in a multicultural society will have to adapt to a different mentality of the citizens. by living in a metropolis, you will be able to witness different kind of people. For example, people from Philippines and Europe has generally a big difference in the way how they think.

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