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Band 7+: What are the difference old people keep things between young keep things?

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In my opinion, there are big differences between old people keeping things and young people keeping things. Old people usually keep their items in a safe place. It's based on their photos and old dishes from relatives. However, young people prefer to keep their things on digital devices like cell phones and laptops because technology has become a big part of their lives.

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In my opinion there are big difference between old people keeping and young people keeping. Old people usually keep their things from their safety place. It’s based on their photos and old dishes of relatives. But however young people prefer to keep their things from digital devices like cell phones laptop because nowadays technology has has big part of become more popular nowadays

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