Band 5+: What are the disadvantages when people keep making changes?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The answer identifies a relevant disadvantage (instability) and correctly links it to psychological consequences. However, the response is quite brief and lacks the depth required for a Part 3 answer. To improve, try to expand on your ideas by explaining *why* constant change leads to instability or by providing a broader societal context. For example, you could discuss how constant changes in the workplace or technology affect a community's ability to establish routines. Aim to develop your points with more complex sentence structures and supporting details to move beyond a simple cause-and-effect statement. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

The answer is direct and follows a logical progression (Cause $rightarrow$ Effect $rightarrow$ Consequence). However, it is quite brief for a Part 3 question. In Part 3, the examiner expects extended responses. To improve, you should use more cohesive devices to expand your ideas, such as 'Furthermore,' 'For instance,' or 'Consequently,' and try to elaborate on *why* instability leads to these mental health issues.

You used appropriate words like 'instability,' 'stressed,' and 'depressed.' However, the vocabulary is somewhat basic for a high-band score. To reach Band 7 or 8, try using more sophisticated collocations or synonyms. Instead of 'destroy their mental health,' you could say 'detrimentally affect their psychological well-being' or 'lead to emotional exhaustion.'

The grammar is accurate, but the sentence structures are very simple (Subject + Verb + Object). You relied on a short sentence starting with 'Because of...', which is grammatically acceptable but lacks the complexity required for higher bands. Try using complex structures such as relative clauses (e.g., '...instability, which often results in...') or conditional sentences (e.g., 'If people are constantly subjected to change, they might...') to demonstrate range.