Part 3

Band 6+: What are the long-term consequences of increasing urbanization on the environment and social structures?

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Increasing urbanization is necessary to improve the social structure for the population. It affects the environment all the time. An improved plan to develop urbanization with minimal impact on the environment and social structure is essential. This is a responsibility of the government at both the city and country levels. With such policies, it is possible to have minimal effects on the environment and address some of the necessary social problems facing the population today.

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Increasing urbanization is very necessary to improve the social structure from the population. that affects all the time the environment. That’s a way improved plan to develop urbanization with minimum impact in the environment and social structure is very necessary. That is a responsibility from the government in the city and in the country. By that type of policy is possible to have minimum effect in the environment and resolve some necessary social problem from the population nowadays.

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social: 3

environment: 3

urbanization: 2

necessary: 2

structure: 2

population: 2

minimal: 2

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Pronunciation

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Task Response

The response touches on the environmental and social impacts of urbanization but lacks depth and specific examples. To improve, provide more detailed explanations of the consequences and potential solutions, and offer concrete examples to support your points.

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The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision and variety. The same words and phrases are repeated (e.g., 'necessary,' 'environment,' 'social structure'). To enhance your lexical resource, try to use synonyms and more specific vocabulary related to urbanization and its impacts. Reading articles and reports on urbanization can help expand your vocabulary.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is generally understandable, but there are several errors that affect clarity. Examples include incorrect use of articles ('the population,' 'a way improved plan'), awkward phrasing ('affects all the time the environment'), and sentence structure issues. To improve, focus on practicing sentence construction and reviewing basic grammar rules, especially articles, verb tenses, and sentence structure. Try to use a wider range of grammatical structures to express more complex ideas.

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