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Band 6+: What are the potential benefits and drawbacks of increased urbanization?

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I am firmly convinced that if people want to increase urbanization, it will have a significant impact on our mental health because various chemical elements can have a detrimental effect on our health, potentially increasing the percentage of cancer and other disorders, for example. I believe this question has two sides. On one side, it is beneficial because increased urbanization leads to economic improvement in countries that pursue it. On the other hand, we face a serious negative impact on the mental and physical health of people. Thank you.

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I firmly convinced if nowadays people want to increase urbanization, it really will have an awful impact on our mental health because any chemical element almost has the biggest awful impact on our health, like maybe increased percentage of cancer and likewise maybe disorders, for example. And I firmly convinced that this question has two sides. One side it is really good because each increasing in urbanization lead to improve economy in each country, in a country which is want to increase urbanization. But on the other hand, we have really awful impact on mental and simple health of people. Thank you.

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The response addresses the question by discussing both potential benefits and drawbacks of increased urbanization on mental health. However, the points could be further elaborated with specific examples and a more structured approach to fully explore the complexities of the topic.

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