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Band 7+: What benefits can a park bring to a city?

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Well, as I mentioned earlier, parks play the role of the lungs of the city. Actually, they freshen the air of big cities, which is caused by traffic congestion and factories working under severe conditions. It also allows people to do their workouts and exercises outdoors because it provides them with a green area that makes the place vibrant. People are more likely to exercise in beautiful scenery while they are working out or running or jogging. Yeah.

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Well, as I mentioned earlier, parks play as a role of the lungs of the city. Actually, they freshen the air of big cities, which it is caused by the traffic congestion and factories which are working under severe situations. Well, it also allows people to do their workouts and exercises outdoor because it provides them with a green area which makes the place vibrant and people are most likely to do exercise in beautiful sceneries while they are working out or somehow they are running or jogging. Yeah.

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The answer is relevant to the question and provides some valid points about the benefits of parks. However, expanding on these points with more detail and examples would strengthen the response. Consider exploring additional benefits such as community building, stress reduction, and increased property values.

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The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. Minor repetition and self-correction ('Well,' 'Yeah') are present but do not significantly impede understanding. Improving the flow by removing the unnecessary 'Actually' would enhance fluency.

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The vocabulary is adequate and mostly precise. Words like 'freshen,' 'congestion,' and 'vibrant' show good range. Using more sophisticated synonyms for 'working out' (e.g., 'exercising,' 'training') would improve lexical resource.

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Grammar is mostly accurate, but there are a few minor errors. The phrase 'which it is caused by' should be 'which is caused by.' The sentence structure could be improved for greater complexity and accuracy. For example, instead of 'people are most likely to do exercise in beautiful sceneries,' consider 'people are more likely to exercise in beautiful scenery.' More varied sentence structures would improve the score.

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