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Band 7+: What can children do with their fame?

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Well, there are several things that children can achieve with their fame. First of all, with great influence, children can easily open up more job avenues in the future. For instance, some young actors or models have made a fortune by advertising products or modeling. As a result, they can gain recognition as well as popularity and earn a great income. Moreover, children can have a unique opportunity to cultivate important skills. Some kids have become accustomed to public speaking, which can boost their confidence and self-image.

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Well, there are several things that children can achieve with their fame. First of all, with great influence, children can easily open up more job avenues in the future. For instance, some young actors or models have made a fortune by advertising products or modeling. As a result, they can gain recognition as well as popularity and make a great income. Moreover, children themselves can have a unique opportunity to cultivate important skills. Some kids have been accustomed to public speaking, which can boost their confidence and self-image.

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children: 3

have: 3

their: 2

great: 2

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Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is precise and appropriate for the task. Words like "job avenues," "cultivate," and "self-image" demonstrate a good range. Consider using synonyms to avoid repetition of words like "children" and explore more nuanced vocabulary related to fame and its impact.

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Grammar is mostly accurate, with only a minor slip in the use of "made a fortune." While understandable, using "earned a great income" in the refined answer is more precise. The sentence structures are varied, but incorporating more complex grammatical structures would enhance the response. For example, using passive voice or embedded clauses would add sophistication.

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