Band 6+: What dangers do you think there are connected with the internet?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer is relevant to the question and provides a valid point about the dangers of the internet. However, to achieve a higher score, consider expanding on the topic by discussing other potential dangers, such as online scams, privacy violations, or the spread of misinformation. A broader range of examples would demonstrate a more comprehensive understanding of the issue. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

The answer is coherent and easy to follow. However, there is a slight hesitation at the beginning ("Well, I heard that..."), and the phrasing could be more concise and natural. Try to avoid filler words and speak more directly. For example, instead of "Well, I heard that there is a risky thing called..." you could say "One significant danger is cyberbullying."

The vocabulary is adequate, but not particularly sophisticated. The term "Cuba bullying" is incorrect and shows a lack of precision. Using more precise vocabulary, such as "online harassment," "trolling," or "hate speech," would improve the score. Expanding on the types of online dangers would also broaden the lexical range.

The grammar is mostly accurate, with only a minor error ("Cuba bullying"). The sentence structures are simple but effective. Using more complex grammatical structures, such as passive voice or subordinate clauses, would enhance the grammatical range and demonstrate a higher level of proficiency.