Band 6+: What did you do yesterday

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The response is quite good and covers the question well. Consider adding more detail to each activity to enrich your answer and make it more engaging. For example, instead of saying 'I went to the academy,' you could describe what you did at the academy or what you learned. This will help to demonstrate a wider range of vocabulary and fluency.

The answer is understandable, but there's a slight lack of fluency. The repetition of "Moreover" and the unfinished sentence at the end detract from the overall coherence. Try to use a wider range of linking words and ensure your sentences are complete.

Vocabulary is adequate, but some words are slightly misused (e.g., "shill" instead of "chill"). Expanding your vocabulary with synonyms and more precise language will improve your score. Consider using more descriptive words to paint a clearer picture.

There are some grammatical errors, such as the incorrect use of "refraining shower." Work on sentence structure and verb tenses for greater accuracy. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and preposition usage.