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Band 6+: What do people like to do when they are old

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When people are old, they like to do various activities. For example, some older people enjoy spending time with their family and gathering together. Additionally, some people, when they are old, have different preferences for how they spend their time.

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When the people are old they like to do various activities like for example some kind of the old people like to spend their time with their family and like to gathering and also some kind of the people are when they are old

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