Band 7+: What do you dislike about your flat?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The response is relevant and provides specific details about the flat. The answer could be improved by providing a wider range of dislikes or elaborating further on the impact of these issues on daily life.

The answer is generally coherent and easy to follow. The use of 'However' and 'On the other hand' provides some structure. However, there are some hesitations and slight awkwardness in phrasing. To improve, focus on smoother transitions and more natural phrasing. For example, instead of 'Starting with my bathroom,' you could say 'Firstly, the bathroom...'

The vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise and varied. 'Refurbishment' is a good word. Consider using more specific vocabulary related to home improvement and furniture. For example, instead of 'a variety of furniture,' you could mention specific types of furniture you desire. The refined answer suggests 'drop leaf table' which is a good example of more specific vocabulary. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

There are several grammatical errors. 'I don't think I dislike so many things on my flat' should be 'I don't think I dislike many things about my flat.' 'There's barely a space to move' is acceptable but could be improved to 'There's barely any space to move.' 'It will be really good if it would be expanded' should be 'It would be really good if it were expanded.' 'if I would add a desk' should be 'if I could add a desk'. Focus on subject-verb agreement, correct use of prepositions, and conditional sentence structures.