Band 5+: What do you do

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The response addresses the question by stating the current job role and involvement in the logistics industry. However, providing more specific details about the roles and responsibilities could enhance the response further. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

The answer is coherent and organized, with a clear explanation of the current job role. There are minor improvements needed in fluency to avoid repetition.

The vocabulary used is appropriate, but there is room for improvement in using more varied and precise terms related to business development and logistics.

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are minor errors in sentence structure. Using a wider range of grammatical structures could enhance the response.