Band 5+: what do you feel when you achieve your dream

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer directly addresses the question and uses appropriate idiomatic expressions like 'over the moon.' To improve, avoid repetitive phrasing; the phrase 'over the moon' and the concept of achieving goals are used multiple times in a short span. Instead of repeating the same feeling, try to expand on the emotional journey or describe the sense of satisfaction and relief in different ways to demonstrate a wider range of vocabulary.

The response is quite repetitive. You used the idiom 'over the moon' at both the beginning and the end of your answer, which makes the speech feel circular rather than progressive. To improve, try to use different ways to express satisfaction or success (e.g., 'a sense of accomplishment' or 'on top of the world') instead of repeating the same phrase. Additionally, work on using more varied cohesive devices to link your ideas logically.

You attempted to use an idiomatic expression ('over the moon'), which is good, but its repetitive use limits your score. There was also a slight misuse of word forms in the raw transcript (e.g., 'I feel myself more energy motivated'). Instead of 'energy motivated,' you should use the adjectives 'energized and motivated.' Aim to expand your vocabulary to include synonyms for 'feel' and 'achieve' to avoid redundancy. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

There are several grammatical inaccuracies in the raw transcript. The phrase 'I feel myself over the moon' is grammatically incorrect; in English, we say 'I feel over the moon.' Furthermore, 'I feel myself more energy motivated' is not a standard grammatical structure. You should practice using adjective complements (e.g., 'I feel motivated') and ensure subject-verb agreement when discussing habitual actions (e.g., 'I set high goals and achieve more').