Band 6+: What do you like most about your job?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The answer is on-topic and directly addresses the question by stating a preference for the major and providing a specific reason (internship experience). However, it lacks depth and detail. To improve, consider elaborating on what specific aspects of the internship were enjoyable or how it changed your opinion, and perhaps mention any particular skills or knowledge you gained. This would make the response more natural and fully developed.

The answer is coherent and easy to follow, with a clear structure: stating the major, giving a reason, and providing an example. However, there is some repetition and self-correction (e.g., 'I like my major which is agriculture is because' and 'I get many experiences there'). To improve, reduce hesitations and use more cohesive devices to link ideas smoothly, such as 'The main reason is...' or 'For instance...'.

The vocabulary is adequate for the topic, with words like 'intern experience', 'palm oil company', and 'changed my opinion'. However, the range is limited and some expressions are not precise (e.g., 'get many experiences' could be 'gained valuable experience' or 'had many learning opportunities'). To achieve a higher score, use more varied and precise vocabulary, such as 'transformative', 'insightful', or 'broadened my perspective'.

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are some errors and awkward structures. For example, 'I like my major which is agriculture is because' is a run-on and grammatically incorrect; it should be 'I like my major, which is agriculture, because...'. Also, 'I get many experiences' should be 'I gained many experiences' (past tense). The answer uses simple and compound sentences, but lacks complex structures. To improve, practice using a variety of sentence structures, such as relative clauses and conditional sentences, and ensure subject-verb agreement and tense consistency.