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Band 7+: What do you plan to do when you grow up?

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When I grow up, I want to dedicate myself to charitable works. I want to help children who are facing challenges, especially those at an early age. For example, there are many girls who are forced into early marriage, and boys who are forced to work at a young age. They need help. They need someone who can help them and pull them out of these situations. I want to be that person who is there for them.

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When I grow up, I want to dedicate myself to charitable works. I, um, want to help the children who are fac. Facing to challenges, um, when, especially who are at an early age, like, no, there are lots of girls who are forced m to early marriage. And the boys who are, um, for. To work at a young age, um, they need help. They need someone who can help them and, um, drag them out from this. From these situations. And I want to be the one who is there.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Vocabulary Repetition:

want: 3

help: 3

them: 3

early: 2

there: 2

forced: 2

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Task Response

7.5

The student provides a clear and well-developed answer to the question, demonstrating a strong understanding of the topic. They express a genuine desire to help children facing challenges, and provide specific examples of the issues they want to address. The answer is both personal and impactful.

Fluency & Coherence

The student speaks with a good level of fluency, but there are some moments of hesitation and repetition, particularly at the beginning of the answer. The overall structure is coherent, with clear transitions between ideas. The student could benefit from practicing speaking more smoothly and confidently.

Lexical Resource

The student uses a wide range of vocabulary, including words like "dedicate," "charitable works," "challenges," "forced into," and "pull them out." The vocabulary is appropriate and precise, demonstrating a good command of the language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The student demonstrates a good grasp of grammar, using a variety of sentence structures and tenses. There are a few minor grammatical errors, such as "fac. Facing to challenges" and "for. To work at a young age." These errors are not frequent and do not significantly hinder understanding. The student could benefit from practicing more complex grammatical structures.

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