Part 3

Band 6+: What do you think about coins ? Do you think it should available??

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I think coins are a very essential product for daily life for barter. From the previous generation, we have seen that many barter situations or economic financial situations have relied on coins, and gold coins are a good criterion to describe coins. Other than that, the availability of coins has been decreasing day by day. I think that should not be the case; coins are very essential. Some chocolates also cost 2 taka or 5 taka. Coins are very essential; they have other benefits as well, such as I can just put coins in my wallet and make my wallet much heavier so that it does not get light.

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I think coins are a very essential product for daily life for Barther. From the previous generation we have seen that many Barther situation or economical financial situation has been gone through coins and gold coins is a good criteria to describe coins and other than that also it has been made to get the coins availability has been decreasing day by day. I think that should not be the case the coins are very essential. Some chocolates are also cost 2 taka or 5 taka coins are very essential it has also other benefits such as I can just put coins in my wallet and make my wallet much more waiter so that it does not get light or weight light.

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Vocabulary Repetition:

coins: 8

that: 4

very: 3

have: 3

think: 2

essential: 2

barter: 2

situations: 2

other: 2

wallet: 2

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Pronunciation

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Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question and provides some valid points about the importance of coins. However, it could benefit from a more structured approach and a broader perspective. Consider discussing the role of coins in the modern financial system and exploring different viewpoints on their continued use. The example about a heavy wallet is less relevant to the main topic.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is understandable but lacks a smooth flow. There's some repetition and the ideas aren't always connected seamlessly. Work on creating smoother transitions between your points and avoid unnecessary repetition. Practice speaking more naturally and spontaneously.

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is adequate but not highly sophisticated. The use of 'Barther' seems to be a misunderstanding or a misspelling. Try to use more precise and varied vocabulary to express your ideas more effectively. Consider synonyms for 'essential' and 'important'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar contains several errors, particularly in sentence structure and word order. There are instances of incorrect word usage ('waiter' instead of 'heavier'). Focus on improving grammatical accuracy and sentence construction. Practice using a wider range of grammatical structures.

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