Band 6+: what do you think about social media

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer stays on topic and provides a clear opinion about social media, showing an ability to elaborate beyond a simple response. The idea that social media has shifted from reflecting lives to targeting consumers is relevant and well-developed. However, the response could be more natural and concise, as some phrasing is slightly awkward (e.g., 'it's starting to become a target' and 'it's like social media is the main thing'). To improve, consider structuring the answer with a clear main point followed by supporting details, and use more precise vocabulary to express the shift in social media's role. Overall, the response is coherent and addresses the question effectively.

The answer is generally coherent and organized around a clear idea (the changing role of social media). However, there are some issues with fluency due to hesitations and self-corrections (e.g., 'in nowadays', 'there start becoming', 'it's like'). The use of cohesive devices is limited, and the final sentence is a bit unclear. To improve, try to speak more smoothly and use clearer connectors like 'for example' or 'in addition' to link ideas.

The vocabulary is adequate for the topic, with some good phrases like 'reflection of people's lives' and 'influence their mindset'. However, there are some inaccuracies and repetitions (e.g., 'target' used twice, 'social media' repeated). The word 'security' seems misused; you likely meant 'society' or 'social behavior'. To improve, expand your range of topic-specific vocabulary and avoid repetition by using synonyms.

There are several grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, 'in nowadays' should be 'nowadays' or 'in today's world', 'there start becoming' should be 'it is starting to become', and 'social media have' should be 'social media has'. The sentence structure is often awkward and lacks variety. To improve, practice using a mix of simple and complex sentences, and ensure subject-verb agreement and correct prepositions.