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Band 6+: What do you think makes someone a good friend to a whole family?

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I think it's not rocket science because a person who is comfortable with everyone in the family and often visits the home will become friends with the people in the family. I know someone who is always attached to their parents more than their peers. But according to me, a genuine person becomes comfortable with parents and others in the family. Some people may be a bit distant or intense about their home life and may not be able to become friends with their whole family.

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I think it’s not rocket science because a person who is comfortable with everyone in the family and often visit home will become friends to the people in family. Because I know someone who will always attached with their parents than their aged people. But according to me the genuine person only become comfortable with parents and others in family. Because some kind of people will be a trite or they will be intense with doing home will not able to become friends with their whole families.

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with: 4

family: 4

their: 4

person: 2

comfortable: 2

become: 2

friends: 2

people: 2

parents: 2

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The answer is understandable and touches upon some relevant aspects of family friendship. However, it lacks depth and detailed explanation. Consider providing more specific examples and elaborating on the qualities that contribute to a strong family friendship, such as empathy, respect, reliability, and shared interests. A more structured approach with clearer arguments would improve the response.

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