Band 7+: What do you usually do on your birthday

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer is good and covers the question well. Consider adding more details about the activities in the park and cafes to make it more engaging and descriptive. Elaborating on the cake-making process or the specific types of cafes visited would also enhance the response.

The answer is coherent and easy to follow. Minor improvements could be made by using more sophisticated linking words or phrases to connect ideas more smoothly. For example, instead of simply listing activities, you could use transitions like 'In addition to...', 'Furthermore...', or 'After that...' to create a more flowing narrative. The slight repetition of 'and' could also be reduced for better flow.

The vocabulary used is appropriate and accurate, but could be more varied and precise. While words like 'delicious' are effective, incorporating more descriptive adjectives or nuanced vocabulary would enhance the response. For example, instead of 'delicious,' you could describe the cake's taste or texture with more specific words. Using synonyms for 'celebrate' would also improve lexical range.

The grammar is mostly accurate, with only minor issues. The sentence 'I usually go to park and cafes' could be improved by adding 'the' before 'park' and using a more sophisticated structure like 'I usually visit parks and cafes' or 'I usually spend time in parks and cafes'. While simple sentence structures are used effectively, incorporating more complex grammatical structures would demonstrate a wider range and improve accuracy.