Band 6+: What does your father do?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The response is adequate but lacks detail and depth. Consider elaborating on your mother's work, her daily routine, or the challenges and rewards of her job to make the answer more engaging and informative. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

The response is coherent and easy to follow. Minor hesitation is noticeable at the end, where the speaker trails off. Adding a concluding sentence would improve fluency and coherence.

Vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise. 'Normal laborer' is a bit vague. Consider using more specific terms like 'factory worker,' 'assembly line worker,' or 'production worker,' depending on her exact role. The incomplete sentence at the end also limits lexical range.

Grammar is mostly accurate. The sentence 'She's working at a company that makes such' is grammatically incomplete. Completing the sentence would improve the grammatical range and accuracy.