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Band 7+: What facilities are needed in a park?

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In my view, a well-designed park should have many facilities. Some of them are essential and others optional. Essential features that a park should possess include playgrounds for children, picnic areas for families, toilets, and other comfort features. It is also beneficial for a park to provide comfort and convenience for visitors by having optional amenities like fitness stations to encourage a healthy lifestyle and promote physical activities between park areas. In this case, they can broaden their audiences and make parks more appealing places for visitors.

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In my view, a well designed park should have many facilities. Some of them are essential and others optional. Some essential features that a park should possess are playgrounds for children, picnic areas for families, toilets and other comfort features. Also, it is beneficial for a park in order to provide the comfort and convenience for visitors to have some optional amenities like fitness stations to encourage a healthy lifestyle and promote physical activities between park squares. In this case, they can broaden their audiences and make parks more appealing places for visitors.

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Vocabulary Repetition:

park: 4

should: 2

essential: 2

optional: 2

features: 2

areas: 2

comfort: 2

visitors: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The answer is well-organized and covers the topic comprehensively. Consider expanding on the types of playgrounds or picnic areas to demonstrate a deeper understanding of park design. Adding examples of fitness stations would also strengthen the response.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is well-organized and coherent. The speaker uses cohesive devices effectively. There is a slight hesitation in the middle, but overall fluency is good. Minor improvements in phrasing could enhance the flow even further.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate and mostly precise. Words like "amenities" and "essential" show a good range. However, more sophisticated vocabulary could be incorporated to demonstrate a wider lexical range. For example, instead of 'comfort features,' consider using more specific terms like benches, water fountains, or shaded areas.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar is mostly accurate with a good range of structures. There is one minor grammatical error ('between park squares' should be 'between park areas'). The speaker uses complex sentences effectively. Minor improvements in sentence structure could further enhance grammatical accuracy and range.

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