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Band 6+: what goals should a society have

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A society should strive to meet the basic needs of its people, including access to quality education, healthcare, technology, and employment opportunities. These are essential for a thriving and just society.

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Well, uh, society should have the goals which fulfill the needs of the common people, whether it is in the field of education, healthc care, technology, employment and many more.

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Task Response

The answer is relevant and addresses the question by outlining key societal goals. However, it could be more specific and elaborate on the benefits of achieving these goals for the society as a whole. For example, the student could mention how access to education can lead to a more informed and engaged citizenry, or how healthcare can contribute to a healthier and more productive workforce. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is well-organized and coherent, with a clear structure and logical flow. The student uses appropriate cohesive devices like 'whether it is' and 'and many more' to connect ideas. However, the answer could benefit from a more fluent delivery, with fewer hesitations and fillers like 'uh'.

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The student uses a good range of vocabulary, including 'fulfill', 'needs', 'healthcare', 'technology', and 'employment'. However, the vocabulary could be more precise and sophisticated. For example, instead of 'common people', the student could use 'citizens' or 'population'. The student could also use more specific terms related to education, healthcare, and technology.

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The answer demonstrates good grammatical accuracy, with correct use of tenses, articles, and prepositions. However, the sentence structure could be more varied and complex. For example, the student could use more complex sentence structures like dependent clauses or participial phrases to add depth and sophistication to the answer.

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