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Band 6+: What have people done to damage the environment?

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Well, a lot, even weak, the reason for deforestation everywhere is due to excessive use of paper. Moreover, our daily life can significantly affect the environment. For instance, carbon dioxide from gasoline can lead to pollution and global warming by increasing the amount of carbon in the atmosphere.

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Well, a lot, even weak, the reason for deforestation everywhere due to excessive e-op paper. Moreover, our weather daily life can significantly affect the environment. For instance, carbon dioxide from gasoline can lead to a pollution and global warming by increasing the amount of carbon in the atmosphere.

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The answer is relevant to the question and provides some examples of environmental damage. However, it could be improved by expanding on the examples and providing a wider range of actions that have damaged the environment. Consider exploring other significant issues such as plastic pollution, industrial waste, and unsustainable agricultural practices.

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Vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. While the student uses relevant terms like 'deforestation' and 'global warming,' more precise and varied vocabulary would enhance the response. Try to use more specific examples of environmental damage.

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There are grammatical errors, such as 'e-op paper' and the slightly awkward phrasing. While the main ideas are conveyed, improving grammatical accuracy and sentence structure will significantly improve the score. Focus on subject-verb agreement and correct preposition usage.

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