Band 5+: What have you done to your room to make it nice

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The answer is quite brief and could benefit from more detail and descriptive language to fully address the prompt. Consider expanding on the organization methods used and providing specific examples of decorative elements or personal touches that contribute to the room's aesthetic appeal.

The answer is understandable but lacks fluency. There are several instances of repetition and self-correction. Improving pacing and reducing filler words like 'and' would enhance fluency. Adding a concluding sentence would improve coherence.

Vocabulary is basic and functional. More descriptive words could be used to paint a clearer picture of the room. The phrase 'darker, lighter colors' is contradictory and needs rephrasing. Consider using synonyms for 'tidy' and 'study table'.

Grammatical errors are present, such as 'thak andce' and incorrect article usage. Sentence structure is simple. Improving grammatical accuracy and using more complex sentence structures would improve the score. The phrase 'the night day' is unclear and needs correction.