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Band 7+: What help do older people need?

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At this stage of life, most people remarkably require more care and support, such as family support, social interactions, medical needs, and cognitive health. However, a huge part of an older person's needs is the psychological aspect. As a result, caregivers or family members should ensure that older people have social activities to keep them engaged, because emotional needs are predominantly neglected due to physical needs.

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At this stage of life most people remarkably require more care and support such as family support, social interactions, medical needs and cognitive health. However, a huge part of an alerted person needs are the psychological needs. As a result, caregivers or family members should make sure that the age that people have social activities to keep them engaged. Because emotional needs are predominantly neglected due to physical needs.

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social: 2

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The response directly addresses the prompt and provides a well-rounded perspective on the diverse needs of older people, encompassing physical, medical, and psychological aspects. Consider structuring your response to further highlight the key needs and provide specific examples to illustrate each point. This would enhance the clarity and impact of your answer.

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The answer is coherent and well-structured. There is a slight stumble in the phrasing of "a huge part of an alerted person needs are the psychological needs." Consider rephrasing for improved fluency. Overall, the ideas flow logically.

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The vocabulary is sophisticated and precise. Words like "remarkably," "cognitive health," and "predominantly" demonstrate a strong lexical range. The phrase "alerted person" could be replaced with "older person" for clarity and precision.

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The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are a few minor errors. The sentence "a huge part of an alerted person needs are the psychological needs" is grammatically incorrect. Also, consider using more varied sentence structures to enhance grammatical range. The overall grammatical accuracy is good, though.

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