Band 7+: What is your favourite animal?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer is well-structured and provides a clear reason for the preference. To improve, consider adding more specific details about what you find fascinating about cheetahs or your experiences observing them.

The response is generally coherent, but the repetition of "Franklin speaking" at the beginning is unnecessary and affects fluency. The use of "moreover" is appropriate for connecting ideas. To improve, avoid unnecessary repetition and ensure a smoother flow of speech.

The vocabulary is adequate, using terms like "fastest animal" and "documentary filmers." However, there's room for more precise and varied vocabulary. For example, instead of "take action watching more about them," you could say "actively seek information about them." Consider expanding your vocabulary related to animals and their behaviors.

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are a few minor errors. "Chitah" should be "Cheetah." "Documentary filmers" should be "documentaries." The phrase "what fascinates me is visiting zoo" should be "visiting the zoo." Focus on accurate article usage and correct pluralization to improve grammatical accuracy.