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Band 5+: What is your opinion of "two-child policy"?

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I have to say I agree with the two-child policy because if a family has more than two children, we won't have enough food and education for a large number of people. If we have more than two children, people may face higher unemployment rates in the future. I think the best way to control population is to try to control population.

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I have to say I agree with 2 child body see because the family has more than 2 childs. We won’t have enough food and education for large number of people. And if we have more than 2 childs, people maybe face unemployment rate in the future. I think the best way to control population is to try to control population.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

have: 3

children: 2

people: 2

control: 2

population: 2

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Pronunciation

5.5

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question and presents a clear opinion. However, the reasoning could be more nuanced and developed. Consider exploring the complexities of the issue, such as the potential economic and social benefits of larger families, or the ethical considerations of government population control. Avoid repetition; the final sentence reiterates the main point unnecessarily.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is understandable, but the phrasing is somewhat awkward and repetitive. The student could improve fluency by using smoother transitions and avoiding redundancy (e.g., 'the best way to control population is to try to control population' is repetitive).

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. The student uses basic words to express their ideas. More precise and nuanced vocabulary would improve the score. For example, instead of 'large number of people,' the student could use 'a burgeoning population' or 'an expanding populace.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors. '2 child body' is incorrect, and the sentence structure needs improvement in several places. The student needs to work on subject-verb agreement and article usage. More complex grammatical structures would also enhance the response.

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