Part 3

Band 5+: what is your passion?

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Maybe in modeling, I like to walk in high heels, take photos, or photography. We want to be the object; we want to be the model. Yeah, taking photos. No. Maybe in modeling, I like the catwalk with high heels, taking photos. And if I don't marry, I will try to join Putri Indonesia. Yeah. Until now, I still love pageants. I still love pageants. What?

Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

Maybe in the modeling, I like to get walk with high heels, photo taking, or photography. We want to be the object, we want to be the model. Yeah, taking photo. No. Maybe in the modeling, I like catwalk with high heels, taking a photo. And if I don’t marry it, I will try to join Putri Indonesia. Yeah. And until now, I still do pageant lovers. I still do pageant lovers. What?

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Overall Band Score

5.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Vocabulary Repetition:

photos: 3

maybe: 2

modeling: 2

heels: 2

taking: 2

still: 2

pageants: 2

Try using synonyms for the above words

Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

Task Response

The answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks a clear and concise articulation of the speaker's passion. Consider structuring your response to clearly state your passion and then elaborate on it with specific details and examples. Avoid unnecessary fillers and hesitations.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks a clear, concise structure. While the main idea is conveyed, the delivery is hesitant and includes filler words ('Yeah', 'No', 'What'). Improving the organization and reducing repetition would significantly enhance fluency and coherence. Consider outlining your thoughts before speaking to improve the flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. Words like 'catwalk' and 'pageant' are relevant, but more precise and varied vocabulary would demonstrate a wider range. Consider using synonyms and more descriptive language to enrich your expression.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are some grammatical inaccuracies and inconsistencies. For example, the sentence structure is sometimes awkward, and there are instances of incorrect verb tense. Focusing on accurate sentence construction and consistent verb tense will improve grammatical accuracy. Practice using a wider range of grammatical structures to enhance your score.

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