Band 6+: What is your plan for the future?

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The response is understandable and covers the question. However, it could benefit from more detailed elaboration on the plans, and the repetition of wanting to find a job in HR could be avoided. Consider providing more specific examples or details to support your plans.

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. There is a slight repetition in mentioning finding a job in HR, and a minor stumble in phrasing ('in what we are living'). Improving the flow by removing the repetition and rephrasing the 'hard time' sentence would elevate the fluency.

The vocabulary is adequate and appropriate for the topic. Words like 'proper job,' 'HR management,' and 'IT recruiting' show a good range. More precise language could be used to describe the 'hard time,' perhaps specifying economic hardship or political instability, depending on the context. Using synonyms for 'plan' would also enhance lexical resource.

Grammar is mostly accurate. Minor errors include the slightly awkward phrasing 'the first of all' and the preposition in 'in what we are living.' Using more complex grammatical structures, such as subordinate clauses, would improve the score. For example, instead of two separate sentences about seeing family, a single sentence with a subordinate clause could be used.