Band 7+: What is your special thing that you want to do?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The response is relevant and provides a clear and personal answer to the question. The ideas are well-connected, and the language used is natural. To further enhance the response, consider providing more specific examples of how you plan to make a meaningful impact.

The response is generally fluent and coherent, with a clear expression of the speaker's dream. However, there are some minor hesitations and awkward phrasing that slightly affect the flow. To improve, focus on using more natural connectors and avoiding unnecessary repetition. For example, instead of 'every day and even every time,' consider using 'regularly' or 'often.'

The vocabulary is adequate and conveys the intended meaning. The phrase 'unshakable dream' is a good choice. However, the lexical range could be expanded to demonstrate greater flexibility. Consider using synonyms for common words like 'help' and 'energy' to add more depth to your response. For example, instead of 'helping people,' you could say 'assisting individuals' or 'providing support.'

The response contains some grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, 'helping to people' should be 'helping people,' and 'their thankful words' should be 'their thankful words.' The phrase 'my emotion will so fresh that I sink' is grammatically incorrect and unclear; it should be 'my emotions feel so fresh that I feel invigorated' or something similar. Focus on practicing accurate sentence construction and reviewing basic grammar rules.