Band 6+: what job do you do?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The answer is relevant to the question and provides some details about the speaker's job. However, to improve, the speaker could elaborate more on the types of products sold, the challenges and rewards of the job, and the skills required. More descriptive language would also enhance the response.

The answer is coherent and easy to follow. There is a slight redundancy in mentioning the need for money to work and live. Minor improvements in phrasing would enhance fluency.

Vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise. Instead of 'products,' specifying the type of products would improve lexical resource. The phrase 'I have an ability to convince people' could be replaced with more sophisticated vocabulary, such as 'I possess persuasive skills' or 'I excel at influencing purchasing decisions'.

Grammar is mostly accurate with only minor errors. The sentence 'I need money to work and live in my accommodation' is slightly awkward. Improving sentence structure and using more complex grammatical structures would improve the score.