Band 7+: What kind of books do you enjoy reading? Why?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The response is relevant to the question and provides some detail. To improve, focus on providing a more direct and elaborate answer about the types of books you enjoy reading now, rather than spending time discussing your childhood preferences. Expanding on why you find psychology books interesting would also strengthen the response.

The response is generally coherent, but there's a slight disconnect between the childhood reading preferences and the current interest in psychology. The transition could be smoother. Consider using cohesive devices like 'However' or 'Now that I'm older' to improve the flow.

The vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise. Instead of 'control the people,' consider using 'understand people' or 'influence behavior,' which are more nuanced and appropriate. Expand your vocabulary related to psychology and reading preferences.

The grammar is mostly accurate, with a few minor errors ('the best type of books is'). Ensure subject-verb agreement. Also, pay attention to prepositions ('reading about some histories' could be 'reading about the history').