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I believe that people with a higher educational background, higher social status, and higher income are more likely to become famous. A person who graduates from prestigious universities has more resources and connections compared to others. With higher social status and income, it's easier for them to gain public attention. For example, Maria Ho became very popular in China. As soon as he appeared on screen, people recognized him as the grandson of the wealthiest man in Macau, and he graduated from MIT. This combination of factors makes it easier for him to be noticed and become famous.

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I believe those people who have a higher educational background, higher social status, and higher income are more likely to become well known. A person who graduates from prestigious universities has more resources and relations compared orders, with higher social status and income, it is really hard for them to not be fixated by public. For example, Maria Ho becomes super popular in China, as soon as he shows up on the screen, He is the grandson of the wealthiest man in Macau, and he graduates from MIT.

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people: 2

social: 2

status: 2

income: 2

become: 2

famous: 2

easier: 2

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Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question and provides a clear opinion. However, the answer focuses on a specific type of fame, which is based on wealth and connections. It would be more comprehensive to consider other types of fame, such as talent, creativity, or social impact. The example provided is relevant but could be expanded upon to further illustrate the point.

Fluency & Coherence

6.5

The answer is generally well-organized and coherent. The ideas are presented in a logical order, and there are some clear transitions between sentences. However, there are a few instances of repetition and awkward phrasing, such as "with higher social status and income, it is really hard for them to not be fixated by public." This could be rephrased for greater clarity and fluency.

Lexical Resource

6.5

The answer demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, including words like "prestigious," "resources," "connections," and "fixated." However, there are some instances of less precise language, such as "orders" instead of "others." The use of "He" instead of "He" in the example is a grammatical error that could be avoided.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

6.5

The answer demonstrates a good command of grammar, with few errors. However, there are a few instances of incorrect verb tenses and pronoun usage, such as "He is the grandson" and "He graduates from MIT." These errors could be corrected with more careful attention to grammar.

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