Band 6+: What kind of work do you do?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The student provides a clear answer to the question, stating their current occupation as a student and their future aspirations to work in a company and become a businessman. However, the explanation lacks depth and specific details about their interests in business. Elaborating on their specific goals or the type of business they are interested in would enhance the response.

The student speaks with some hesitation, using fillers like "um" and "uh." The response is generally coherent, but the sentence structure could be improved. For example, "it's your own shows, um, my role that I want to achieve" is unclear and could be rephrased as "it's my own goal that I want to achieve."

The student uses a range of vocabulary, but some choices are not precise. For example, "keen of" is not a common phrase and could be replaced with "interested in." The student could also use more specific vocabulary related to business to demonstrate a wider range.

The student demonstrates a good grasp of basic grammar, but there are some errors. For example, "a high school is a small country" is grammatically incorrect. The student also uses the phrase "it's your own shows" which is unclear and grammatically incorrect. The student should focus on using more accurate and varied grammatical structures.