Band 6+: What kind of work do you do?

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The response is relevant to the question and demonstrates a good understanding of the task. Consider providing more specific details about your responsibilities and the types of videos you create to further enhance the response.

The answer is understandable but lacks fluency. There are some hesitations and unclear phrasing, such as "this boss industry." The ideas are presented in a somewhat disorganized manner. Improving the flow and using clearer transitions would enhance coherence. Practice speaking more smoothly and connecting your ideas more logically.

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated or precise. Words like "excusing" are misused. Expanding your vocabulary with more specific and accurate terms related to your work would improve this aspect. Consider using synonyms to avoid repetition.

There are several grammatical errors, including incorrect word choices ("excusing"), and unclear phrasing. The sentence structure is sometimes awkward. Focus on improving grammatical accuracy and using a wider range of grammatical structures. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and correct tense usage.