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Band 5+: What kinds of adverts are most common in your country?

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Money is a product advertised in my country, but the most promoted product is baby oil. Why? Because products for children below three years are more crucial for the government in my country. It's like you advertise to people to know about the products or not. I think it's important for more people to know about the product. That is not just about the quality and use of the product, but the benefits for children using the product. I think it's crucial for my country because it's essential for children.

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Money is product advertised in my country, but the most product promotes in my country. I think the baby oil, why? Because product with children below three years is more crucial for the government in my country. It’s like you advertise to people to know about the products or not. I think it’s more different people that know about the product. Yeah, that is not about the quality and the use of the product, but the benefit if the children using their product. I think it’s one of the crucial for my country because it’s one of essential for the children.

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

product: 5

it's: 4

country: 3

children: 3

about: 3

because: 2

products: 2

crucial: 2

people: 2

think: 2

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Pronunciation

6.5

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question and attempts to address it in a general manner. However, the response lacks a broad overview of common advertisement types and focuses excessively on a single product category. Consider providing a wider range of examples and analyzing the overall advertising landscape of your country. The reasoning behind the prevalence of baby oil advertising could be further elaborated and supported with more specific details.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is understandable but lacks fluency. There are several instances of repetition and self-correction. Improving the flow of ideas and reducing hesitations would significantly enhance the score. Consider pausing briefly to structure your thoughts before speaking.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. While the message is conveyed, more precise and varied vocabulary would improve the score. For example, instead of repeatedly using 'product,' try synonyms like 'item,' 'commodity,' or 'goods.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are present, impacting the overall clarity and accuracy. While the main ideas are understandable, focusing on correct sentence structure and tense consistency is crucial. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and preposition usage.

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