Band 6+: What kinds of people become famous?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The answer stays on topic and directly addresses the question, but it leans heavily on a personal opinion and a specific example, which is more characteristic of a Part 2 style response. To achieve a higher score, you should generalize the discussion, exploring multiple factors such as talent, opportunity, timing, media influence, and public perception. Additionally, avoid focusing on personal wealth or success, as the question is about fame in general. Consider structuring your response to present a balanced view, for instance, by mentioning that while hard work is important, factors like luck, networking, and societal context also play significant roles.

The answer is coherent and organized, with a clear introduction, example, and conclusion. However, there is some repetition ('to be a rich and famous, to be a rich and famous') and a minor self-correction. To improve, avoid repetition and ensure smoother transitions between ideas.

The vocabulary is adequate but not highly precise or flexible. Phrases like 'problem skills' are awkward; 'problem-solving skills' is more accurate. The example of Elon Musk is relevant but could be elaborated with more specific vocabulary. To improve, use a wider range of precise terms and avoid vague expressions.

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are some errors: 'people are becoming famous' should be 'people become famous' (present simple for general truths), 'when they face' is fine, but 'has never gave up' should be 'has never given up' (present perfect), and 'based on their family' should be 'related to his family'. The sentence 'to be a rich and famous' is incomplete. To improve, use a wider range of structures and ensure subject-verb agreement and correct verb forms.