Band 6+: What kinds of places are crowded?

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The answer addresses the question directly and provides a specific example. To improve, consider expanding on the reasons why these places are crowded or providing a wider range of examples.

The answer is generally coherent, but there's a slight pause before 'shopping malls'. To improve, try to maintain a consistent pace and avoid unnecessary pauses. Focus on connecting your ideas smoothly.

The vocabulary is basic. The word 'scruidest' is incorrect and should be 'crowded'. To improve, try to use a wider range of vocabulary related to places and crowds, such as 'bustling', 'packed', or 'teeming with people'.

There are grammatical errors such as 'scruidest' and 'on our shopping malls is Osiratis'. The correct phrasing would be 'the most crowded places in our shopping malls are'. Also, 'weekend days' can be simplified to 'weekends'. To improve, focus on using correct grammar and sentence structure.