Band 7+: What kinds of websites do you often visit?

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The response is well-structured and directly addresses the question. It provides specific examples and elaborates on the reasons for visiting those websites.

The response is generally fluent, but there are a few hesitations and instances of self-correction ('just I use them remade release'). Using cohesive devices like 'on top of that' is good. To improve, focus on reducing pauses and minor self-corrections. Practice speaking more smoothly and naturally.

The vocabulary is adequate and relevant ('social networking sites,' 'unwind,' 'video sharing platform,' 'DIY tutorials,' 'documentaries'). However, there's room for more precise and varied vocabulary. For example, instead of 'keep in talk,' you used 'keep in touch' in the refined answer, which is better. Try to incorporate more sophisticated vocabulary related to online activities.

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are some errors ('just I use them remade release to keep in talk'). The sentence structure is relatively simple. To improve, focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures and ensuring accuracy in more complex sentences. Pay attention to prepositions and verb tenses.