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Band 6+: What measurements should we taken to improve parks and gardens in the City.

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I think several steps should be taken by the government and the public to improve parks and gardens in the city. First and foremost, the government should give preference to planting a variety of flowers in the parks because a pleasant smell makes the place look like a haven. In fact, the government should also provide facilities like walking trails, benches, and some recreation areas for children. A music system in the park could also play an important role. Additionally, I think that local people should keep the place clean and green. Why not?

Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

I think few steps should be taken by the government uh, and public to improve parks and gardens in the city. First and foremost is governmentar should give preference to plant variety of flowers in the parks because a pleasant smell make this place look like a heaven. In fact, the go should also provide facilities like why stalling cheers and some recreation areas for children. In fact, a music system in park is also playing important role while other thing I also think that local people should uh, keep this place clean and green why?

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Vocabulary Repetition:

should: 4

government: 3

think: 2

parks: 2

place: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

Task Response

The student provides a good range of ideas for improving parks and gardens, including planting flowers, providing facilities, and encouraging community involvement. However, the answer lacks a clear sense of organization and could benefit from a more structured approach. For example, the student could group similar ideas together or use transition words to connect their points more effectively.

Fluency & Coherence

The student speaks with some hesitation and repetition, particularly at the beginning of the answer. The flow of ideas is somewhat disjointed, and the student could benefit from using more connecting phrases to improve coherence. For example, instead of saying "In fact, the go should also provide facilities..." the student could say "In addition, the government should also provide facilities..." to create a smoother transition.

Lexical Resource

The student uses a good range of vocabulary, including words like "preference," "variety," "haven," and "facilities." However, there are some instances of less precise language, such as "why stalling cheers" instead of "benches." The student could also benefit from using more specific vocabulary to describe the types of flowers or recreation areas they have in mind.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The student demonstrates a good understanding of grammatical structures, but there are some errors in the answer. For example, the student uses "governmentar" instead of "government" and "why" instead of "why not." The student could also benefit from using more complex sentence structures to demonstrate their grammatical range.

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