Band 6+: what new things would you like to have in your neighbourhood. why/whynot?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

This is a good start to answering the question. Consider expanding on why these additions would be beneficial to the neighborhood and providing more specific examples. Elaborating on the positive impacts (e.g., improved community interaction, health benefits, environmental advantages) would strengthen your response.

The answer is understandable, but the phrasing is somewhat awkward and disjointed. The structure could be improved by using clearer connectors and a more logical flow of ideas. For example, instead of starting with "Yes, my point of view," a more natural opening would be "I would like to see more green spaces and parks in my neighborhood." The repetition of "such" could also be avoided.

The vocabulary is adequate, but lacks precision and range. Words like "appealing future" and "such so many things" are not very specific. More precise vocabulary would elevate the response. For example, instead of "such so many things," the speaker could list specific amenities like benches, water features, or fitness equipment.

There are several grammatical errors, including incorrect use of articles and prepositions. The sentence "by increasing the number of such a space is like large playground" is grammatically incorrect. The speaker needs to work on sentence structure and accuracy to improve their score. More complex grammatical structures would also enhance the response.