Band 5+: what place do you most like to visit.

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The response is relevant to the question and demonstrates a clear understanding of the task. However, the connection between the football festival, universities, and cuisine is not entirely clear, and the focus on earning money seems somewhat tangential to the question of favorite places to visit. Consider structuring your answer to better highlight the reasons behind your choice of place, focusing on aspects directly related to your enjoyment and experience of visiting that location.

The answer is understandable but lacks a smooth flow. There's some repetition and slightly unclear phrasing. Improving the linking words and sentence structure would enhance fluency and coherence. Consider using more sophisticated connectors beyond 'besides'.

Vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise and sophisticated. Phrases like "expand my horizons" are a bit generic. More specific vocabulary related to English culture, universities, or the economy would improve the score. The phrase 'complete food' is unclear and needs rephrasing.

Grammar contains several errors. "visit to England" should be "visit England." The phrasing around universities and cuisine is awkward. The sentence about earning money is grammatically incorrect and needs restructuring. More accurate and varied grammatical structures are needed for a higher score.