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Band 6+: What problems can people have when they are on their daily journey , for example to work or school?why

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Well, for me, I think that there are many problems people can have when they are on their daily journey, for example, to work or school. Firstly, it may be their documents or some personal items like that, especially computers, because it is easy for people to forget something. I think it is essential for people to prepare carefully, especially when going on a daily journey that is far from home. The second problem is that they may lose something on their journey too, like they can't find their things anywhere and have to search deeply. Lastly, items may be stolen, or someone may steal from them. So, people need to protect their belongings carefully.

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Well, for me, I think that there are many problems people can have when they are on their daily journey. For example, to work or to school. Firstly, it’s maybe their documents or some people, some paints like that. Especially, maybe some computers because it is easier for people to forget something. And I think that it is essential and people need to like prepare carefully, especially go on a daily journey that is far away from home. The second problem is that maybe they will be lost something on their journey too. Like they can’t find the things anywhere and they have to find deeply. And the last question is that the things may be stolen or they may be someone who is stolen. So people need to protect the things carefully.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Vocabulary Repetition:

their: 5

that: 4

people: 4

they: 3

journey: 3

think: 2

daily: 2

items: 2

especially: 2

something: 2

carefully: 2

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Pronunciation

6.5

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Task Response

The answer is quite good and addresses the question well. However, it mainly focuses on personal belongings and their loss or theft. Consider broadening the scope to include other common problems such as traffic congestion, delays in public transport, accidents, and the impact of weather. Also, try to provide more general reasons for these problems, rather than focusing solely on individual actions or misfortunes.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is understandable and mostly coherent, but there are some minor issues with fluency. The phrasing is sometimes awkward, for example, "the things may be stolen or they may be someone who is stolen." The structure is generally clear, but smoother transitions between points would improve the flow. Consider using more sophisticated linking words and phrases to connect your ideas.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate, but not particularly sophisticated. Words like "deeply" could be replaced with more precise language, such as "thoroughly" or "extensively." A wider range of vocabulary would enhance the response. Try to use more specific and descriptive words to express your ideas more effectively.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors, such as the incorrect use of "paints" instead of "items" and the awkward phrasing mentioned above. Sentence structures are sometimes simple and repetitive. Improving grammatical accuracy and using more complex sentence structures would significantly improve the score. Focus on subject-verb agreement and correct tense usage.

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