Band 6+: What qualities make someone a good leader?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The answer is relevant to the question and attempts to address the qualities of a good role model. However, the response is limited in scope and lacks depth. Consider expanding on the concept of leadership qualities and providing more diverse examples of positive attributes that make someone a good role model. A broader range of examples and a more detailed explanation would strengthen the response. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

The answer is understandable, but the structure could be improved. The connection between strong leadership and being a role model needs further explanation. The phrase 'controls everything' is a bit simplistic and could be replaced with something more nuanced, such as 'effectively manages a team or organization.'

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision. Words like 'controls everything' are not precise enough for a band 9. More sophisticated vocabulary related to leadership and role modeling would improve the score. Consider using words like 'influential,' 'inspiring,' 'integrity,' 'empathy,' etc.

There are grammatical errors, such as 'it gives for people an opportunity.' The sentence structure is also somewhat simplistic. More complex sentence structures and accurate grammar are needed for a higher score. Consider using a wider range of grammatical structures, such as passive voice and relative clauses.