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Band 5+: What qualities should an athlete have

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I think there are many good qualities an athlete should have, like their physical fitness and health. For example, if a student or person is a dedicated sportsman, they can achieve their goals through hard work. They develop their physical fitness and can work very effectively.

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I think there are many good qualities should an athlete have like their body feet and their healthy issues is not bad actually for example if a student or person is very a sportsman went went sportsman at that time he then he achieved their goal hard work and they achieve their body feet and they area very easily work

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The answer is relevant to the question and provides some relevant qualities. However, it could be improved by elaborating on a wider range of qualities beyond physical fitness and providing more specific examples to support the claims. Consider discussing mental attributes such as resilience, discipline, and strategic thinking.

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