Band 6+: What responsibilities do you have at work ?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer is relevant to the question and covers a good range of responsibilities. Consider expanding on one or two of the mentioned responsibilities with specific examples to further enhance the response.

The answer is generally fluent and coherent. However, the phrase "so many responsibilities to play" is a bit unnatural. Consider rephrasing it as "a wide range of responsibilities" or "numerous responsibilities." Also, the ending could be slightly improved. Instead of "and the rest," a more specific example or a summarizing phrase like "among other duties" would enhance coherence.

The vocabulary used is adequate for the topic and demonstrates a reasonable range. However, some word choices could be more precise. "Giving" is used repetitively. Try diversifying verbs, for example, "providing counseling," "conducting assessments," "delivering talks." This will showcase a wider vocabulary range and improve precision. Also, "radio talk" and "school talk" could be improved to "radio presentations/programs" and "school presentations/workshops."

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are minor inaccuracies. For instance, "responsibilities to play" is not grammatically correct. Use "responsibilities to fulfill" or simply "responsibilities." The sentence structure is relatively simple. While this isn't necessarily negative, incorporating more complex sentences where appropriate could boost the score. For example, "In addition to providing counseling and health education, I assess new clients and deliver presentations in various settings, including schools and on the radio."