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Band 6+: What role, if any, should schools play in teaching students about personal finance and investment?

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From my perspective, I think that teachers have a role in teaching students about personal finance and investment. They can provide valuable guidance so that students can learn how to save money and spend it in a meaningful way.

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From my perspective, I think that teachers have access to a role in teaching students about personal finance and investment. bring a lot of adventures like their students can teach themselves how to save the money and spend that money on the meaningful way

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The response addresses the question directly and provides a clear opinion. To improve, consider expanding on the 'how' and 'why' of the school's role, and perhaps touch on different aspects of personal finance and investment that could be included in the curriculum. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

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The vocabulary is basic and lacks precision. The phrase "bring a lot of adventures" is not appropriate in this context. To enhance your lexical resource, try to use more specific and varied vocabulary related to finance and education. For example, instead of 'meaningful way,' you could say 'responsible manner' or 'financially sound manner.'

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