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Band 5+: What role should individuals play in addressing issues of social inequality?

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I think individuals should spend more time volunteering to help those in need, like giving them money, teaching them how to make money, or providing them food.

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I think individuals should spend more time for volunteer to have the in need people like give them money or teach them how to make money, give them food.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Vocabulary Repetition:

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money: 2

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Task Response

The response addresses the question but could benefit from a more developed explanation. Consider expanding on the different ways individuals can contribute and the impact of these actions on social inequality. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The response is somewhat coherent but could benefit from smoother transitions between ideas. The phrase 'to have the in need people' is a bit awkward and disrupts the flow. Try to use more natural connectors and avoid phrasing that sounds unnatural.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is basic but adequate for conveying the main points. Using more varied and precise vocabulary would enhance the response. For example, instead of 'in need people,' consider using 'disadvantaged individuals' or 'people facing hardship.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is generally understandable, but there are some errors. 'Spend more time for volunteer' should be 'spend more time volunteering.' Also, the list at the end could be improved for parallelism (e.g., 'giving them money, teaching them how to make money, or providing them food'). Focus on accurate use of prepositions and verb forms.

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