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Band 7+: what should we do to protect endangered animals

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We should try to protect endangered animals by keeping them in reservations. I think we should provide them with a suitable environment, just like their natural habitat. We should also try to limit illegal hunting. One of the main reasons for endangered animals is the wrong practices of some hunters. They usually hunt animals to sell them or their fur or skin. So I think we should make strict rules regarding this matter.

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We should try to protect endangered animals by keeping them in reservations. I, uh, think we should provide for them the suitable environment, just like their real environment. And we should also try to limit the illegal hunting for them. Because, uh, one of the main reasons for, um, like, endangered animals is the wrong practices of some hunters. They usually just like to hunt animals in order to sell them or maybe sell their fur or skin. So I think we should make strict rules for this matter.

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Vocabulary Repetition:

should: 4

animals: 3

them: 3

endangered: 2

think: 2

their: 2

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Pronunciation

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Task Response

The answer is quite good and covers the main aspects of the question. Consider expanding on the solutions offered, providing more specific examples or details to enrich your response. Also, explore other methods of protection beyond reservations and legal restrictions, such as habitat restoration or community engagement programs.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and well-organized. The occasional 'uh' and 'um' are minor and do not significantly detract from the fluency. Slightly more sophisticated linking words could enhance the flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate and appropriate for the topic. Words like 'reservations,' 'suitable environment,' and 'illegal hunting' are used effectively. More precise vocabulary could be used in places (e.g., 'natural habitat' instead of 'real environment').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar is mostly accurate. There are a few minor grammatical imperfections ('provide for them the suitable environment' could be improved to 'provide them with a suitable environment'). Sentence structures are varied, but more complex grammatical structures could be incorporated to achieve a higher score.

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