Band 4+: What types of photos do you like talking?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer addresses the topic of photos but contains a slight semantic error in the response. The question asks about types of photos you like 'talking' about (or perhaps 'taking', though the prompt says 'talking'), but the response focuses on the subjects themselves rather than the act of discussing or viewing the photographs. To improve, ensure the response directly connects the subject matter back to the medium of photography. Additionally, expanding on why these specific images are visually interesting or why they spark conversation would help in providing a more well-developed response.

The answer is very short and lacks logical progression. There is a significant disconnect between the question (about types of photos) and the answer (about famous people). To improve, you need to ensure you directly address the prompt and use cohesive devices (like 'For example' or 'Because') to link your ideas. Currently, the response feels like a collection of fragmented thoughts rather than a coherent response.

The vocabulary used is very limited and contains several errors that impede meaning (e.g., 'novel price' instead of 'Nobel Prize', 'hands' instead of 'highly' or 'famous'). You attempted to use complex concepts like 'humanity', but the word choice was imprecise. Focus on learning collocations - words that naturally go together - such as 'win a prize' or 'contribute to humanity'.

There are major grammatical errors throughout the response. Specifically, there are issues with subject-verb agreement ('people which has give'), incorrect relative pronouns ('people which' instead of 'people who'), and fragmented sentence structures. To reach a higher band, you must practice basic sentence construction and ensure that your tenses are consistent.